Cambridge 13 Test 4 IELTS Writing - Anh Ngữ Thiên Ân

Câu hỏi : In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem.

Mở Bài

There is an increasing concern amongst people that although human beings have achieved breakthroughs in agriculture, famine has striking millions of people across the world. This essay will focus on some tangible reasons and solutions which had best to be taken steps to partly mitigate this reality.  

Thân Bài 1

On the one hand, the overpopulation without tight control of governments could be considered to be the foremost cause. Indeed, once the proliferation of birth rate is out of control, we definitely have trouble guaranteeing food resources. By way of illustration, many African countries getting stuck in this case are often in the face of adversities with respect to malnourished people and even those who are dying of starvation in virtue of food shortages and famine. 

Besides, sharing among people as well as countries is also worth pondering these days. Take a good example, the wastefulness of food is a matter of complete indifference to people being weak from hunger. Also, natural disasters as prolonged droughts, flash flood and human-driven problems embodying wars and social riots contribute to exacerbate this problem.

Thân Bài 2

On the other hand, several measures need implementing to alleviate the problem. Initially, governments in affected countries should propagate the drawbacks of overpopulation on an intimate connection with famine relief to raise awareness amongst their citizens. In addition, it is worthwhile to encourage establishing the charity and humanistic organizations which help raise money for humanitarian aids to people in need. 

Simultaneously with this, everyone needs have a deep respect for food by consuming enough food in accordance with their needs. In terms of extreme weather events, we can take a solution into account by sending experts in the field of agriculture to affected areas. Finally, governments could keep conflicts on the grounds of region, race in their control by means of strict laws and punitive measures.

Kết Bài

In conclusion, rhetoric alone may not bring about changes, so we can join hands to combat the threat of widespread famine nowadays by the aforementioned solutions. (330 words)

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